Posted by Lin Lougheed on October 02, 19101 at 17:26:29:
In Reply to: # 38 Choose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain why you think it has changed people's lives. posted by J.S. on September 26, 19101 at 04:58:11:
You gave three good reasons, but you need to rewrite your first paragraph to make these reasons more evident.
You mention "business, travelling, exploring, transportation of loads." But you discuss "communication, business, and transportation of goods."
"Traveling" may be a better choice than "communication."
Other word choices:
No "the"
The progress, coming with rapid strides, has changed our life.
"Progress has changed our life..."
It affords us = It enables us to...