Posted by Michele Peters on April 26, 19102 at 15:23:38:
In Reply to: What holiday u would like to create? posted by Tony Chen on April 16, 19102 at 10:50:37:
Your essay is well thought out and concise.
Some comments:
the people who contribute to the foundation of our country...
Contributed to laying the foundation
Variety of holidays, as I think, one
Variety of holidays, I think one
long been believed as the sign of
long been believed to be the sign of
So in order to treasure the MOST significant day of our mankind
suppose
I propose that
mind of some children and by then they
minds (children is plural)