Posted by Michele Peters on June 16, 19102 at 13:21:18:
In Reply to: The college or university level should be availavle to only the good students or all students? posted by Jack on June 10, 19102 at 00:57:15:
You have good general statements and supporting details. You should give one more reason with supporting details and restate your three reasons in your conclusion. I think you'll do well.
Some other comments:
high level of education and necessary
higher level necessary for...
There a large number of students who are not a good high school student
are not good high school students
To give an opportunity for
...opportunity to...
similar to the university's one because
....university's because...