Posted by JOHN DE on August 09, 19102 at 12:04:47:
In Reply to: to John posted by Nadia on August 08, 19102 at 18:30:15:
That¡¯s a good idea to practicing my writing in this way. But because I am preparing for a writing examination now, the topics are restricted in some extent. If you would like to writing in these topics, I will provide these topics gradually. The style is similar to the topic as I provided on the first time.
The essay you have write is really a good one. I can¡¯t find any mistakes or limitations that need to revise. The next topic will be: ¡°Competition is ultimately more beneficial than detrimental to society." Present your perspective on the issue, using relevant reasons and/or examples to support your views.