Posted by Lin Lougheed on February 26, 19103 at 16:14:33:
In Reply to: Which is the best place in home? posted by vandana on February 24, 19103 at 12:23:12:
You are off to a good start. Take your ideas and put them in order.
"The kitchen is the favorite room in my house. It is more than a kitchen, it is a family room. In the kitchen, we can prepare food, enjoy one another's company, and of course, eat delicious meals."
You mentioned these ideas in your essay, but you did not organize them. Now write one paragraph on each general idea using specific details from your experience.