Posted by Lin Lougheed on January 04, 19102 at 11:13:06:
In Reply to: Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay. posted by Serkan Dag on November 22, 19101 at 20:21:05:
I agree with your fellow countryman that you did a great job with your essay. Your thoughts are well organized and well presented.
You made a few (3) mistakes with the article "the". See if you can find them.
to give the young people
Educational is the adjective.
in the education system.
You can also omit the infinitive.
help us to learn